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Lost In Your Strong Arms

passion steals my heart
 
tender embrace as lips meet –
 
     lost in your strong arms
 
 
 
*For Francine’s Sensuous Senryu contest

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Robin Davis

Date: 5/11/2014 10:44:00 PM

Carolyn Such a lovely, romantic, sweet, charming, beautiful, and sincere write. You captured true love in so few words. Thank you for the great comment on my Her Dream Boy poem.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 6/28/2011 2:22:00 PM

Fantastic senryu Carolyn.Thanks so much for all your kind and very sweet congrats and comments you send.I guess your MRI was ok eccept you need to stop working at your PC as much.I really had a nice anniversary and hunnie had a wonderful B-day yesterday Kids gave their dad a nice party and we saw a movie and had ice-cream cones had a great time.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/28/2011 9:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carolyn! I sent you some hugs. did you get them?

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/28/2011 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Francine's contest. A gentle yet sizzling write. Good one, Carolyn. Hugs, Licia. xxx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/27/2011 9:01:00 PM

Very nice my dear...congrats on your big win. I will try to call soon..thinking of you. LNC

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/27/2011 2:32:00 PM

Carolyn, congratulations on your awesome win in Francine's contest.. I knew she would love this one ;) love Wilma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 1:52:00 PM

this made me smile! you have the arms I had the hands I wonder where the rest of him is? LOL Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 11:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 11:50:00 AM

My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Carolyn

Russell Smith

Date: 6/27/2011 11:37:00 AM

cograts on a great win

Treasa Jarvis

Date: 6/27/2011 10:39:00 AM

wow. Great write. Congrats on your win..God Bless

Cory Long

Date: 6/27/2011 10:26:00 AM

congrats on your win cory

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/27/2011 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your third place win with this lovely write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/27/2011 10:01:00 AM

congrats Carolyn on your third place win in the contest with this truly romantic entry

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/27/2011 5:58:00 AM

a real passion turn on in so few words ... Of course at that point who would need words! Francine will love this one for sure! s'cuse me Carolyn-- gotta go work out now .. building up my biceps ya know ..... : ) haha ...love your poem expect to see it on top somewhere, Carolyn

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/26/2011 4:10:00 PM

Sensuous indeed Carolyn, all the very best in the Contest.!

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/26/2011 1:04:00 PM

Carolyn, I love the sense of safety and belonging in this write of yours.. Wishing you all the best for the contest ;) love you Wilma

Jack Horne

Date: 6/26/2011 12:48:00 PM

Beautiful piece, my friend. I'm not sure how to approach this one - I don't want to write something X rated, LOL. I was going to write a humorous piece, but I see that's not allowed.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/26/2011 12:15:00 PM

Really enjoyed how you included "strong arms" here, Carolyn :)-- really great to be be safe and secure in love that way -- I hope all is well with you :) hugs and don't sit too long now!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/26/2011 11:57:00 AM

A wonderful Senryu Carolyn, I enjoyed the read, I like strong arms. Best to you in the contest~ Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/26/2011 10:24:00 AM

Very sensous expression, Carolyn

Cory Long

Date: 6/26/2011 8:54:00 AM

nicely done good luck in the contest. cory