"lost In Your Eyes"

We can be in a crowd or dancing under the moon...
When our eyes look up there's no one else in the room...
It's like an electric line to you that travels from my eyes to my heart..
I lose control and I'm absorbed by your love on every part..
Though you're not here tonight so I will dream of your scent..
I get lost in thoughts of your words from letters that you sent...
Like a spice to a meal that you sprinkle for taste...
Your words fly through my soul, nothing here to waste...
Just mere words from you lift me from this state...
With you in my world there is such love that is fate..
Counting the days till you're sitting on my lap and so close..
Whispering sweet things in your ears as our eyes start to coast..
The touch of your hands and a kiss from your lips..
The heat starts to rise as I move my hands to your hips..
Our bodies one as we are lost in this kiss...
Under this moonlit sky we drift into bliss....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gilly Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 7:01 PM
oh my god, i died here, seriously, i wil send u a message telling you how yur beutiful writeing makes me feel, i just cant even comment or began to even think, im speechless, yur so amazing,,...expect a message !
Culverhouse Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 4:00 AM
in the third from the last line I think rice should be rise, Otherwise very passionate and enjoyable work. You are very talented!!
Phillips Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 2:28 AM
loved this passionate piece
Kendrick Avatar
May 10, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Great romantic write that you have penned in these lines...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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