Lost In Your Eyes

In a world of chaos, you're a sight to behold, 
A symphony of colors, your story unfolds. 
Gorgeous hues surround, as my heart takes flight, Eyes as brown as earth, I'm lost in your light.
Your laughter's a cascade, tinkling like chimes, Monsoon's gentle whisper, through magical rhymes. Words like spells enchant, I'm caught in your view, Losing my way, lost in you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Brotherton Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Such a sweet and romantic poem. Your imagery is divine. I Love it. Have a Blessed day.
Stark Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 9:01 AM
Glad you liked it
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Curie, your words have woven a tapestry of beauty, sweetness, and romance that transports me to a world where I am utterly captivated. Your comment on my poem is like a gentle breeze that touches my soul, causing it to dance with joy. I am filled with gratitude for your appreciation, as it adds a touch of warmth to my heart.
Stark Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Sotto,I'm immensely honored by such affectionate display of appreciation.
George Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Wow , this is so beautifully romantic. "Your laughter's a cascade, tinkling like chimes, Monsoon's gentle whisper, through magical rhymes." Love this description, dear friend !
Stark Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Thanks
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 1:35 AM
- This is beautifully, sweet and romantically written, Curie :) - Lost in your poem :) - Thank you for visiting my poem :) -
Stark Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 7:00 AM
love this . it's short and sweet and beautifully romantic
Stark Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 7:46 AM
Glad you liked it
Ball Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:52 PM
Oooo! This would be perfect on a Valentine card. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Stark Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:02 AM
Hope your valentine likes it too
Downing  Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 6:26 PM
How enchanting :)
Stark Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 12:02 AM
I was enchanted to meet you
Kaur Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 6:36 AM
nice one!
Stark Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:12 AM
Glad you liked it
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