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Lost In Your Eyes

In a world of chaos, you're a sight to behold, 
A symphony of colors, your story unfolds. 
Gorgeous hues surround, as my heart takes flight, Eyes as brown as earth, I'm lost in your light.
Your laughter's a cascade, tinkling like chimes, Monsoon's gentle whisper, through magical rhymes. Words like spells enchant, I'm caught in your view, Losing my way, lost in you.

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Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/9/2023 8:04:00 AM

Such a sweet and romantic poem. Your imagery is divine. I Love it. Have a Blessed day.

Curie Stark
Date: 9/9/2023 9:01:00 AM

Glad you liked it

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/9/2023 6:37:00 AM

Curie, your words have woven a tapestry of beauty, sweetness, and romance that transports me to a world where I am utterly captivated. Your comment on my poem is like a gentle breeze that touches my soul, causing it to dance with joy. I am filled with gratitude for your appreciation, as it adds a touch of warmth to my heart.

Curie Stark
Date: 9/9/2023 9:02:00 AM

Sotto,I'm immensely honored by such affectionate display of appreciation.

Valsa George

Date: 9/9/2023 5:57:00 AM

Wow , this is so beautifully romantic. "Your laughter's a cascade, tinkling like chimes, Monsoon's gentle whisper, through magical rhymes." Love this description, dear friend !

Curie Stark
Date: 9/9/2023 9:02:00 AM

Thanks