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Lost In Your Eyes

In a world of chaos, you're a sight to behold, A symphony of colors, your story unfolds. Gorgeous hues surround, as my heart takes flight, Eyes as brown as earth, I'm lost in your light. Your laughter's a cascade, tinkling like chimes, Monsoon's gentle whisper, through magical rhymes. Words like spells enchant, I'm caught in your view, Losing my way, lost in you.

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Date: 9/9/2023 8:04:00 AM
Such a sweet and romantic poem. Your imagery is divine. I Love it. Have a Blessed day.
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Curie Stark
Date: 9/9/2023 9:01:00 AM
Glad you liked it
Date: 9/9/2023 6:37:00 AM
Curie, your words have woven a tapestry of beauty, sweetness, and romance that transports me to a world where I am utterly captivated. Your comment on my poem is like a gentle breeze that touches my soul, causing it to dance with joy. I am filled with gratitude for your appreciation, as it adds a touch of warmth to my heart.
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Curie Stark
Date: 9/9/2023 9:02:00 AM
Sotto,I'm immensely honored by such affectionate display of appreciation.
Date: 9/9/2023 5:57:00 AM
Wow , this is so beautifully romantic. "Your laughter's a cascade, tinkling like chimes, Monsoon's gentle whisper, through magical rhymes." Love this description, dear friend !
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Curie Stark
Date: 9/9/2023 9:02:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 9/1/2023 1:35:00 AM
- This is beautifully, sweet and romantically written, Curie :) - Lost in your poem :) - Thank you for visiting my poem :) -
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Curie Stark
Date: 9/1/2023 12:06:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 8/29/2023 7:00:00 AM
love this . it's short and sweet and beautifully romantic
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/31/2023 7:46:00 AM
Glad you liked it
Date: 8/28/2023 10:52:00 PM
Oooo! This would be perfect on a Valentine card. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/29/2023 12:02:00 AM
Hope your valentine likes it too
Date: 8/28/2023 6:26:00 PM
How enchanting :)
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/29/2023 12:02:00 AM
I was enchanted to meet you
Date: 8/26/2023 6:36:00 AM
nice one!
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/27/2023 2:12:00 AM
Glad you liked it

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