Lost in woods

Incessant drizzle soak pith
of each and every dense tree
in evergreen forest where
moss, algae, lichens paints lush
hues of green, blue and rich brown

While wet birds forget to sing
glistening snakes search shelter
termites, ants, crawlers, stingers
start climbing slippery trees
inundated forest floor

Near to dusk, a shy sun shaft
reaches decayed fallen log
adding chill to eerie air
a great gray owl looks at me
I count my heart-beats to dawn
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Date: 4/6/2025 10:48:00 AM
Whoa!! Reads like a scary place to be. Camped out in the woods. Thanks for sharing this descriptive and emotive work with us. Sara K
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 4/7/2025 1:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind visit and words dear poet. I am glad you liked it. Thank you.
Date: 4/5/2025 10:40:00 PM
Most enigmatic and absorbing scenes you Bring to the minds eye Thriveni.' May God Keep your ways.'
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 4/6/2025 1:11:00 AM
I am glad you liked it dear friend, your kind visit and precious words and blessings means so much to me, brings me joy. thank you dear poet.
Date: 4/5/2025 10:25:00 AM
Hello Thriveri c. Mysore, This is a wonderful nature poem. it made me feel like i was there. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/6/2025 10:05:00 AM
Hello Thriveri, your welcome. I enjoyed this poem my dear friend.Oh your welcome. have a nice day. /Darlene
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Date: 4/6/2025 1:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind visit dear friend. I am glad you liked the write. Thank you so much for your good wishes dear poet, thank you.
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