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Lost In the Mist

A storm has come and as the waves; Crash against a wall built to defend; In the sea of life; so too has love once again; Been held back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/27/2009 3:56:00 PM
oh sorry and not to get lengthy but the "wall" is the symbol that defends me from myself (smile)
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:52:00 PM
For the commenter s with questions Since there seems to be some question regarding love and defending; or which is which and such. Love can often in it’s turbulence become a force to defend against. To my best guess I’d have to describe the sea as the love I have for another and the waves are a continuous on slot of destruction and yes love sometimes must be defended against
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Date: 3/25/2009 9:00:00 PM
Great analogy, using a wall to describe the bottled-up feelings of love. Very intriguing!
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Date: 3/25/2009 1:11:00 PM
Good day Leonard. This is something to ponder, for walls are painstakenly built up, and not so easily breached. Beautifully penned, Leonard. A touchy subject you've handled with velvet gloves. Wishing you and yours the best! Mikki
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Date: 3/24/2009 12:28:00 PM
Then what is love? is it the wall, or is it the wave? Go forth for in my love is peace, friend.
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