Lost In the Haze

Beautiful mountains lost in the haze.
Haze made from the mad human maze.
Maze of trains and automobile craze.
Craze of selfishness and polluted days.
Days of unlimited resources, nothing to faze.
Faze not, but the next generation dearly pays.
Pays forever is where the future of the human lays.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lemmens Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 10:40 AM
A wise woman with a gift of the written art. Strong pure and inteligent. Doing great Judy. Thumbs up. Thanks for your lovely message too.. next poem will be much lighter.. as i remain positive about love and life ... I LIVE I FEEL .. I continue .. to heal
Bird Avatar
April 19, 2009 at 9:47 PM
None truer words spoken here and you did it with such great style and excellent flow.
Esquire Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 8:44 AM
Dear Judy, Such Talent The last word of one line is the first word of the next making the reader jump to each line engulfing its content A Super Write Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments YOURS ALWAYS...HG
Bones Avatar
March 21, 2009 at 2:14 PM
hi judy thank you for your lovely kind words God bless you from john
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 5:10 PM
u re beautiful.......it`s true,in everyone of these lines.
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 10:42 AM
I love the tempo and the rhyme in this incredibly visionary view of our world. Great poem, Judy!
Esquire Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 7:55 PM
Dear Judy, This is a beautiful Rhyme POEM of Nature Pleading with the Humans let me live for YOUR Children LOVE ALWAYS...HG
Townsend Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 7:19 PM
Great rhyme and flow to this one. I love how each line ties into the other. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita
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March 16, 2009 at 3:45 PM
Dear Judy: What a beautiful, special poem you have written. Love your rhymes. Thanks for reading my poem. It is true, and all I can do is hope that he seeks treatment. When I started on PoetrySoup, ABC was the format that just came up, and I stuck with it. Not really sure what it means, but my poems always turn out nice looking. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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