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Lost In the Haze

Beautiful mountains lost in the haze. Haze made from the mad human maze. Maze of trains and automobile craze. Craze of selfishness and polluted days. Days of unlimited resources, nothing to faze. Faze not, but the next generation dearly pays. Pays forever is where the future of the human lays.

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Gwen Lemmens

Date: 7/12/2009 10:40:00 AM

A wise woman with a gift of the written art. Strong pure and inteligent. Doing great Judy. Thumbs up. Thanks for your lovely message too.. next poem will be much lighter.. as i remain positive about love and life ... I LIVE I FEEL .. I continue .. to heal

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/19/2009 9:47:00 PM

None truer words spoken here and you did it with such great style and excellent flow.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/26/2009 8:44:00 AM

Dear Judy, Such Talent The last word of one line is the first word of the next making the reader jump to each line engulfing its content A Super Write Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments YOURS ALWAYS...HG

John Robert Bones

Date: 3/21/2009 2:14:00 PM

hi judy thank you for your lovely kind words God bless you from john

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 3/20/2009 5:10:00 PM

u re beautiful.......it`s true,in everyone of these lines.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2009 10:42:00 AM

I love the tempo and the rhyme in this incredibly visionary view of our world. Great poem, Judy!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/16/2009 7:55:00 PM

Dear Judy, This is a beautiful Rhyme POEM of Nature Pleading with the Humans let me live for YOUR Children LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/16/2009 7:19:00 PM

Great rhyme and flow to this one. I love how each line ties into the other. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita

Janice Herzog

Date: 3/16/2009 3:45:00 PM

Dear Judy: What a beautiful, special poem you have written. Love your rhymes. Thanks for reading my poem. It is true, and all I can do is hope that he seeks treatment. When I started on PoetrySoup, ABC was the format that just came up, and I stuck with it. Not really sure what it means, but my poems always turn out nice looking. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo