Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

Lost In Love

Holding you inside one fragile beautiful flower blossoming dream
Sweet you are my love painting words breathtaking within all wishes

Silvery streak of moonlight shimmering a star 
only now I read between the lines trailing thoughts 

How can you ask someone to stop loving without care 
an impossible task even for the hardest of hearts  

If I were the last person on this planet sunshine through clouds 
that's how it draws to me you're asking me not to love you 

Misery likes company cuts deeper than a knife wounds beauty
never was the answer to love in our friendships face

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Poesy Relish February 24, 2015 at 8:31 AM It is an impossible task for love is not something we can start or stop at will.. nice pen Liam.. lov,nad! Liam Mcdaid February 28, 2015 at 2:14 PM ah so sweet of you nad its one of those emotions lost in another realm of feelings trying to understand the truth bless you dear friend wishing you a blessed weekend

Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 9:28 AM I agree, it is an impossible task. Liam Mcdaid February 28, 2015 at 1:59 PM sure is richard when the other side is blinded with hate wonderful comment dear pal wishing you a great weekend thank you kindly

Gary Bateman February 23, 2015 at 6:04 AM Liam, A sad couplet indeed -- but a magnificent write and articulation of the heartache and pain felt while "lost in love." Outstanding indeed Mate!! Best Leprechaun Wishes, Gary Liam Mcdaid February 28, 2015 at 1:56 PM one of those things gary lost in love not understanding the other side of the coin wonderful comment dear pal wishing you and your beautiful wife a blessed weekend passing you both a leprechaun smile

Robert Lindley February 22, 2015 at 6:38 AM My friend, I've been lost deeply in love that was not to endure a number of times in my long life and as bad as it gets the heartache eventually passes. Great poetic write and A7..... Liam Mcdaid February 22, 2015 at 3:49 PM thank you robert dear pal the truth i would rather live alone than suffer false promises in loves name dealing heartaches and judgement love will always remain in my heart beautiful wonderful comment wishing you a blessed beautiful sunday

Kp Nunez February 21, 2015 at 9:25 PM A twist of the knife already stabbed in the heart, that's how it feels when someone you love asks you to stop loving them. Your poem speaks of what countless others must have felt, Liam. A 7. May God bless you and everything you do, including giving us more reads as beautiful as this one though hopefully with a happier theme that would reflect what I hope your future will bring. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim Liam Mcdaid February 22, 2015 at 3:25 PM its the judgement that stabs the heart kim the opposite face of love tearing down the face of beauty wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful wishing you a blessed beautiful day

Eileen Manassian February 21, 2015 at 4:04 PM To stop loving someone you once loved with all your heart is so hard, Liam. No one has the right to tell you that. You love as you want to love. Of course....someone as wonderful as you needs to be loved back to the fullest. The lines in this poem are deep and meaningful...It leaves me so sad...Hugs, my dear friend. Liam Mcdaid February 22, 2015 at 2:09 PM its impossible eileen but some think they have a god given right to even attack tears i smile dear pal forgiving love will always remain a strong light your so sweet do not be sad for me as god has his reasons i follow now his path everything will work out in the end i believe in faith wishing a blessed beautiful day

Dorian Petersen Potter February 21, 2015 at 3:58 PM Hi Liam! Very beautiful pen Liam, perfectly written and expressed, and so very sad too, my dearest friend. I am with Terry who could ask you to stop loving them? To me that's really crazy! And not very nice at all if you ask me. It must be like you say that misery likes company. A person like that maybe doesn't deserve your love at all.Who knows! My heart is very sad for you.A huge 7 +++ from me! Your pen is truly mighty golden! Have a very lovely weekend! In His light! God bless you always! :) Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^" Liam Mcdaid February 22, 2015 at 2:00 PM yeah dorian it dawns when someone quotes such words never attacking tears it makes one feel really used as it was all empty promises in the end wonderful comment dear pal deeply appreciated wishing you a blessed day

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 21, 2015 at 12:19 PM This one great write Liam. God bless you.I am really amazed at your imagery in Silvery streak of moonlight shimmering a star.Love... Liam Mcdaid February 22, 2015 at 1:32 PM thank you rajat i was looking at the moon as a star was blinking lost in faraway thoughts bless you dear pal always from the heart