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Lost In Love

Lost in Love He stood on the edge of an ancient sea Reflecting on the things he needs Realizing that before him is what he wants The woman of his dreams, the joy of his life She responds to his touch, her senses alive A beautiful flower gently bending with the wind Her desire sweeter than the purest honey Her body melting into his, becoming one Their tongues dance on the effervescence of love Their hearts palpitate with an urgent yearning Their minds twisting about in a common hunger The longing for embrace not fully satisfied As they lose themselves in the wonder of love The freshness of attraction and the comfort of familiarity They are unaware of the vibrant city around them As they pull themselves apart they notice the awaiting ferry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/31/2010 4:56:00 PM
good write
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Date: 12/30/2010 8:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. have fun on the Poetry Soup site and happy new year too..with luv..
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Date: 12/29/2010 3:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup John. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2010 3:01:00 PM
Creative view on love. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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