Lost in Love

I search,
Am I a lost cause?
I speak to all, to friends
To enemies.
Where can she be?
My love is nowhere to be found.
I search for her daintiness,
Her dark black fringe,
Her lithe contours so marvellous.
Her red full lips.

Am I pursuing a foolish dream?
A glimpse.
That’s all I ask.
I will be in paradise.

Tell her it was just a random remark.
I love her till the end of times.
And I wander around the main streets,
Searching,
Searching.
I am not much I know,
But I need her.
I saw a glimpse of her.
She smiled.
But it could not be her!
Her hair was red.
Could she have played a trick on me?
I only see red now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/17/2024 5:07:00 AM
Touching.. Romantic... Sounds real great.. Enjoyed reading it.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/12/2024 4:02:00 AM
Victor, a sweet romantic poem, with a little mystery, nicely penned.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/12/2024 3:06:00 AM
- A beauty one would not forget, Victor - Beautiful and romantic poem :) - hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 1/11/2024 1:21:00 PM
wow, this is amazing. A fave on this one
Login to Reply
Date: 1/11/2024 12:17:00 PM
What a wonderful/creative write/story. I enjoy reading this one. Have Blessed day writing away.......................
Login to Reply
Date: 1/11/2024 7:53:00 AM
Another splendid poem. My heart beats with hope that you find her.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/11/2024 5:57:00 AM
"I love her till the end of times" This says it all, Victor... Loved your everlasting love story... Really enjoyed reaying it... My fav...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 7:13:00 PM
Enjoyed tbi# teasing write, Victor. Love in love with love searches for love alone
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 5:30:00 PM
Your poem full of feelings and images. Well done, enjoyed reading. There’s a soulmate out there, I feel for everyone when the time comes, it will come.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 4:33:00 PM
very touching .Victor, sple,did declaration, wish you will meet her or someone who looks like thanks for sharing this moving poem
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 2:02:00 PM
Very touching one and also romantic. Great.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 1:13:00 PM
Victor, is a poignant exploration of longing and uncertainty. Your search for her essence, from daintiness to red lips, paints a vivid picture of a love pursued with passion. The mix of doubt and determination resonates deeply. The glimpse of a smile and the questioning of reality add layers to this emotional journey. Your words capture the essence of love's complexities and the quest for a connection that feels almost within reach. - Blessings, Daniel
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 11:13:00 AM
Nicely done Victor..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 11:07:00 AM
Your exquisitely nostalgic display of affection, Victor, is lovely. Your written work emanates a deep-seated sentiment of romance, as this specific composition elicits a burning need to be embraced by fervent crimson lips.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 9:18:00 AM
I hope you find her Victor! I sense the pathos on your lines, crafted so well in your poem of yearning desire! Happy Wednesday!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 5:43:00 AM
You are such a romantic and this one is lost in sadness, looking for red lips…everything is red, now
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 5:24:00 AM
I can feel the emotion in this one. There is always someone out there who is the right person to fill our needs. Sometimes you will find them in some unusual places like the library, grocery store, at church, etc. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and dropping by my page. Sara K
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 4:46:00 AM
Wonderfully reminiscing in love, Victor. So well penned!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 3:08:00 AM
The pursuit of love is not in vain, Nicely penned
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 2:43:00 AM
There was a time i had red hair. Lolol. Ah this is so lyrical and intriguing! Very well expressed and delivered. Somethings can be too good to be true. Leaving you with more questions than answers. Pleasure reading always your descriptive and soulful writes. Sending you light always
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 12:13:00 AM
Either she was playing a trick on you or punishing you for that random remark. A bunch of flowers will please her and if you want to really win her over throw in a box of chocolates. Tom
Login to Reply
Buhagiar Avatar
Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/10/2024 12:57:00 AM
You hit it on the head. Great interpretation.
Date: 1/9/2024 3:51:00 PM
Your story kept me hoping she would be found. But alas, it was not to be. Much enjoyed, Victor. :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/9/2024 3:16:00 PM
Hello Victor, I do think she played a trick on you. Happy New Year. /Darlene/
Login to Reply
Date: 1/9/2024 1:48:00 PM
She's a fox, that one! Tantalizing but ever elusive, just out of reach. Good one Vic
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad