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Lost in Love

I search, Am I a lost cause? I speak to all, to friends To enemies. Where can she be? My love is nowhere to be found. I search for her daintiness, Her dark black fringe, Her lithe contours so marvellous. Her red full lips. Am I pursuing a foolish dream? A glimpse. That’s all I ask. I will be in paradise. Tell her it was just a random remark. I love her till the end of times. And I wander around the main streets, Searching, Searching. I am not much I know, But I need her. I saw a glimpse of her. She smiled. But it could not be her! Her hair was red. Could she have played a trick on me? I only see red now.

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Date: 1/17/2024 5:07:00 AM
Touching.. Romantic... Sounds real great.. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 1/12/2024 4:02:00 AM
Victor, a sweet romantic poem, with a little mystery, nicely penned.
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Date: 1/12/2024 3:06:00 AM
- A beauty one would not forget, Victor - Beautiful and romantic poem :) - hugs
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Date: 1/11/2024 1:21:00 PM
wow, this is amazing. A fave on this one
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Date: 1/11/2024 12:17:00 PM
What a wonderful/creative write/story. I enjoy reading this one. Have Blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 1/11/2024 7:53:00 AM
Another splendid poem. My heart beats with hope that you find her.
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Date: 1/11/2024 5:57:00 AM
"I love her till the end of times" This says it all, Victor... Loved your everlasting love story... Really enjoyed reaying it... My fav...
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Date: 1/10/2024 7:13:00 PM
Enjoyed tbi# teasing write, Victor. Love in love with love searches for love alone
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Date: 1/10/2024 5:30:00 PM
Your poem full of feelings and images. Well done, enjoyed reading. There’s a soulmate out there, I feel for everyone when the time comes, it will come.
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:33:00 PM
very touching .Victor, sple,did declaration, wish you will meet her or someone who looks like thanks for sharing this moving poem
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Date: 1/10/2024 2:02:00 PM
Very touching one and also romantic. Great.
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Date: 1/10/2024 1:13:00 PM
Victor, is a poignant exploration of longing and uncertainty. Your search for her essence, from daintiness to red lips, paints a vivid picture of a love pursued with passion. The mix of doubt and determination resonates deeply. The glimpse of a smile and the questioning of reality add layers to this emotional journey. Your words capture the essence of love's complexities and the quest for a connection that feels almost within reach. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/10/2024 11:13:00 AM
Nicely done Victor..
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Date: 1/10/2024 11:07:00 AM
Your exquisitely nostalgic display of affection, Victor, is lovely. Your written work emanates a deep-seated sentiment of romance, as this specific composition elicits a burning need to be embraced by fervent crimson lips.
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Date: 1/10/2024 9:18:00 AM
I hope you find her Victor! I sense the pathos on your lines, crafted so well in your poem of yearning desire! Happy Wednesday!
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Date: 1/10/2024 5:43:00 AM
You are such a romantic and this one is lost in sadness, looking for red lips…everything is red, now
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Date: 1/10/2024 5:24:00 AM
I can feel the emotion in this one. There is always someone out there who is the right person to fill our needs. Sometimes you will find them in some unusual places like the library, grocery store, at church, etc. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:46:00 AM
Wonderfully reminiscing in love, Victor. So well penned!
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Date: 1/10/2024 3:08:00 AM
The pursuit of love is not in vain, Nicely penned
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Date: 1/10/2024 2:43:00 AM
There was a time i had red hair. Lolol. Ah this is so lyrical and intriguing! Very well expressed and delivered. Somethings can be too good to be true. Leaving you with more questions than answers. Pleasure reading always your descriptive and soulful writes. Sending you light always
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Date: 1/10/2024 12:13:00 AM
Either she was playing a trick on you or punishing you for that random remark. A bunch of flowers will please her and if you want to really win her over throw in a box of chocolates. Tom
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Date: 1/10/2024 12:57:00 AM
You hit it on the head. Great interpretation.
Date: 1/9/2024 4:34:00 PM
she sounds like a bit of a tease perhaps? Red heads are known for playing tricks. I love the light hearted nature of this poem. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 1/9/2024 3:51:00 PM
Your story kept me hoping she would be found. But alas, it was not to be. Much enjoyed, Victor. :)
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Date: 1/9/2024 3:16:00 PM
Hello Victor, I do think she played a trick on you. Happy New Year. /Darlene/
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Date: 1/9/2024 1:48:00 PM
She's a fox, that one! Tantalizing but ever elusive, just out of reach. Good one Vic
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