Lost In Lace

Blue lace velvet sprinkle in shine,
   Lying in dead grass alive.
Silk embroidered carnations of crime,

Help! Please make it stop...
   Tired, so tired, a trip gone to long,
So tell me where is my home.

Fly, fly blue lace velvet of mine,
   Reaching no destination yet once again,
Still deprived of seeing the end.

Tired, so tired please make it stop,
   Blue velvet, sadistic velvet,
I Want To Go Home...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 2:27 PM
- A powerful poem, Brian - // Anne-Lise :)
Davey Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Thank you so much a lot of emotion in that one
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