Lost In a Dream

She's lost in a naked dream Barring all to see With each key stroke Undressing all of me Barring all to see Reveling vulnerability Undressing all of me Stings so painstakingly Revealing vulnerability With each key stroke Stings so painstakingly She's lost in a naked dream Lay

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Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/2/2011 9:31:00 PM

* "AGAIN I FIND MYSELF YOUR BEAUTIES PENETRATING VERSE * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL WALAYEE * I LOVE YOUR DEPTHFUL PASSION * TIS THE GOLD AMID THE VEINS OF POETIC SPLENDOURS * SHE LOOKS & SEEMS SOOO BEAUTIFUL * SOMETHING VERY LOVELY ABOUT HER * I AM GOING TO FAVE YOUR BEAUTY AS A * WELL, LET'S JUST SAY I FIND YOUR GIFT VERY BEAUTIFUL * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 2:51:00 PM

go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet

John Rhinem

Date: 11/20/2011 10:33:00 AM

Smile, oh but my and many loving eyes behold the true Beauty inside and again, so very lovely she is amid this truthful light * So, never forget this and Yesss, absolutely wonderful verse * Painting yourself amid such beautiful colours, my dear beautiful Lay * My love always, John! *