Lost In a Dream

She's lost in a naked dream
Barring all to see
With each key stroke
Undressing all of me

Barring all to see
Reveling vulnerability 
Undressing all of me
Stings so painstakingly

Revealing vulnerability
With each key stroke
Stings so painstakingly 
She's lost in a naked dream

Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Seraphin Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 9:31 PM
* "AGAIN I FIND MYSELF YOUR BEAUTIES PENETRATING VERSE * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL WALAYEE * I LOVE YOUR DEPTHFUL PASSION * TIS THE GOLD AMID THE VEINS OF POETIC SPLENDOURS * SHE LOOKS & SEEMS SOOO BEAUTIFUL * SOMETHING VERY LOVELY ABOUT HER * I AM GOING TO FAVE YOUR BEAUTY AS A * WELL, LET'S JUST SAY I FIND YOUR GIFT VERY BEAUTIFUL * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
D. Avatar
November 20, 2011 at 2:51 PM
go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet
Rhinem Avatar
November 20, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Smile, oh but my and many loving eyes behold the true Beauty inside and again, so very lovely she is amid this truthful light * So, never forget this and Yesss, absolutely wonderful verse * Painting yourself amid such beautiful colours, my dear beautiful Lay * My love always, John! *
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