Lost In a Dirt-Path

lost in a dirt-path
amidst the thickets of forest
eyes grasp new silence



Marvin Celestial's Contest
Haiku on Possibilities
July 24, 2014
From Gabby Sabre
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 29, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Gabby, , Love the scenario .... Enjoyed the Haiku.... LINDA
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July 24, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Hi Gabby, this looks like a winner to me. Beautiful and expressive write! Good luck in the contest.
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