Darla Appleleaf Poet Free verse

Lost In a Breeze

Is a smile so hard,
With salty tears
Pouring down pale cheeks?

Love lost in a breeze.
Twisting and turning,
Just out of reach.

Find me, oh love.
With fiery eyes
And arms outreached.

A path dispersed,
Like a puzzle
That's yet to be complete.

Where are you, oh love?
Wild and free.
Just like love,
Lost in a breeze.

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Faye Gibson May 3, 2014 at 3:21 PM Beautiful writing, Darla. I want to encourage you to keep putting the words on paper.

Deborah Shiells April 29, 2014 at 11:02 AM Hello Darla, What a gorgeous write from start to finish!! Thank you for sharing this fine write with us~) Peace, Deborah Darla Appleleaf April 29, 2014 at 3:45 PM Hi Deborah! Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) -Darla

Sam Toil April 27, 2014 at 7:34 AM Nicely metaphor! I picture a kite when its string has slipped out of my hands. I run after the string, but the kite soars. The string is just out of reach. I jump for it. And miss. And the kite continues to soar. It is gone. Just like your love here. "Wild and free" and "Lost in a breeze". Good work!...BH Darla Appleleaf April 27, 2014 at 4:16 PM Thank you! :)