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Lost In a Breeze

Is a smile so hard, With salty tears Pouring down pale cheeks? Love lost in a breeze. Twisting and turning, Just out of reach. Find me, oh love. With fiery eyes And arms outreached. A path dispersed, Like a puzzle That's yet to be complete. Where are you, oh love? Wild and free. Just like love, Lost in a breeze.

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Faye Gibson

Date: 5/3/2014 3:21:00 PM

Beautiful writing, Darla. I want to encourage you to keep putting the words on paper.

Deborah Shiells

Date: 4/29/2014 11:02:00 AM

Hello Darla, What a gorgeous write from start to finish!! Thank you for sharing this fine write with us~) Peace, Deborah

Darla Appleleaf
Date: 4/29/2014 3:45:00 PM

Hi Deborah! Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) -Darla

Sam Toil

Date: 4/27/2014 7:34:00 AM

Nicely metaphor! I picture a kite when its string has slipped out of my hands. I run after the string, but the kite soars. The string is just out of reach. I jump for it. And miss. And the kite continues to soar. It is gone. Just like your love here. "Wild and free" and "Lost in a breeze". Good work!...BH

Darla Appleleaf
Date: 4/27/2014 4:16:00 PM

Thank you! :)