Notes About The Poem

Lost Glory

What becomes of a lost glory?
When it vanishes, does it take hope along?
Does it explode....
Like dynamite and smell like smoke?
Does it sink irretrievably deep
Into the depths of a stygian abyss?
Or does it float away hopelessly
Out of sight and reach
Like an untethered balloon?
Does the heat of the sun burn it
Into scattered ash like Icarus' wings?
Does it dangle dangerously on the precipice
Of a cliff about to tumble over like timber?
Is it easy or hard to recapture?
Is it like searching and finding
A tiny pebble that has been thrown so far?




STANDARD NO 120,ANY FORM,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 lines 
Sponsored by Brian Strand(Winner: 1st Place)
Date written and posted: 09/30/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Inman Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 5:49 PM
A thoughtful write Edward, it makes me think, can true glory ever be lost. I guess so if there is no one to remember.
Ibeh Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Thank you, James:-) Glad you liked it!
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Line!:-)
Delaney Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on your top placement. I love your deep thoughts on lost glory. So inspiring and thought provoking. Best, SuZ
Ibeh Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Thank you very much, Susan!:-) Much appreciated
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