Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Lost Friends

Words set to music
they ring through the air
listen real closely
before they disappear

Pen them to paper 
they bleed all I'm worth
from stars in the distance
to the beauty on Earth

Heed my attention
dear friends that have flown
whispered past secrets
oh where have you gone

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty July 2, 2018 at 10:47 AM splendid poem. Love & Regards>rajat

Darlene De Beaulieu June 30, 2018 at 6:49 PM Hello Tim yes we do lose our friends. I have lost some of mine. They went to haven. Have a nice evening my friend.

Lin Lane June 30, 2018 at 5:50 PM Nice concept of missing those we care about. I love Jan's comment about not missing others so much. I'll not be missed but who gives a fig.

Brandy Nicole June 30, 2018 at 12:49 PM Some friends stay, while others leave. Moments and memories will always be. Your thoughts touch my heart. ~ Brandy

Charlie Smith June 30, 2018 at 9:05 AM Oh where, oh where? Good one Mr.Tim...

Ilene Bauer June 30, 2018 at 7:50 AM beautifully said, tim!

Heidi Sands June 30, 2018 at 7:20 AM I can feel this as I read it Tim. Well expressed :)

Lyric Man June 30, 2018 at 6:59 AM Tim.. I love this deep, philosophical, melancholy write. And I can relate to it easily.

Jan Allison June 30, 2018 at 5:53 AM Aww Tim there are many who are no longer here some we miss greatly like Darren others not so much. I do try and soup mail if I see someone is not around, sometimes I get a response but that is quite rare:-( Have a lovely weekend:-) hugs jan xx