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Lost For a Moment

I stood still on a path
Snow glaring in the sun
Blinding me to hear
Icicles dripping
Lost for a moment
I can see us at the carport
Working together
The edges now flapping in the wind
Our laughter resonates with me
I start walking slowly
One step forward, I think
One step forward for now

Heidi Sands

12/20/22

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Date: 12/21/2022 2:53:00 PM
Even in the iciest situations, togetherness makes the day!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/22/2022 5:38:00 AM
Yes Gershon. Thank you . I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 12/21/2022 4:22:00 AM
I hope you can continue to move forward Heidi!! Merry Christmas xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/21/2022 6:31:00 AM
I will. Thank you Mike. Merry Christmaa ! xxoo
Date: 12/20/2022 2:40:00 PM
Quite poingnant, the power of the reflection Causes another sense to come to the fore.' A faithful rendition, to the reader Heidi.' It is from life experience, and true poetry.)
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Date: 12/20/2022 2:40:00 PM
Quite poingnant, the power of the reflection Causes another sense to come to the fore.' A faithful rendition, to the reader Heidi.' It is from life experience, and true poetry.)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2022 3:02:00 PM
Thank you Joe. I appreciate your feedback and I enjoyed reading it :)
Date: 12/20/2022 2:14:00 PM
It's quite a nice feeling to just let go occasionally and feel the peace. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2022 2:28:00 PM
Yes it is Tom. Thank you. I hope your day is going well :)
Date: 12/20/2022 1:18:00 PM
Ruminating in a daydream--lovely poem, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2022 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Vijay . I hope you have a nice evening :)
Date: 12/20/2022 12:18:00 PM
- You did it ... Heidi - hugs :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2022 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine ! Hugs :)
Date: 12/20/2022 12:09:00 PM
Oh yes! To get lost in a moment… Merry Christmas!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2022 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Kim. Merry Christmas ! :)
Date: 12/20/2022 10:30:00 AM
I enjoyed your "Lost for a moment." Have a great day..............
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2022 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Paula. I am happy to hear that :)

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