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Lost For a Moment

I stood still on a path Snow glaring in the sun Blinding me to hear Icicles dripping Lost for a moment I can see us at the carport Working together The edges now flapping in the wind Our laughter resonates with me I start walking slowly One step forward, I think One step forward for now Heidi Sands 12/20/22

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/21/2022 2:53:00 PM

Even in the iciest situations, togetherness makes the day!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/22/2022 5:38:00 AM

Yes Gershon. Thank you . I hope you have a nice day :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/21/2022 4:22:00 AM

I hope you can continue to move forward Heidi!! Merry Christmas xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/21/2022 6:31:00 AM

I will. Thank you Mike. Merry Christmaa ! xxoo

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/20/2022 2:40:00 PM

Quite poingnant, the power of the reflection Causes another sense to come to the fore.' A faithful rendition, to the reader Heidi.' It is from life experience, and true poetry.)

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/20/2022 2:40:00 PM

Quite poingnant, the power of the reflection Causes another sense to come to the fore.' A faithful rendition, to the reader Heidi.' It is from life experience, and true poetry.)

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/20/2022 3:02:00 PM

Thank you Joe. I appreciate your feedback and I enjoyed reading it :)