Lost Eyes

Somewhere down the line, her hair was blond

Now the black roots showed the ageing woman I knew so well

She still had that dignified hatred etched into her face though

I could even see the longing for the question

A wanting to finally retaliate

She probably wouldn't be around in another ten years 

Not with that pent-up anger

Strange how time does that

To keep it all hidden inside for so long

I really should ask, say something to her

I would sue your hairdresser

Her eyes exploded

So strange, it was the eyes that drew me to her all those years ago

She walked away without turning round

Dignified to the end

I wonder if they’ll put that on her headstone

Hated to the end

The very end

Yet her eyes stayed true.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Hated 'til the end. Sad legacy to leave behind. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Rose  Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 2:34 PM
wow, yes the eyes can reveal so much,
Bell Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 2:05 AM
They sure do.
Hockaday Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Relatable.
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 1:17 PM
wow, GREAT poem here, Paul. Such impact and the ending is a wow
Bell Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 7:38 AM
She wasn't a happy girl.
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 1:16 PM
I cannot help but detect an element of Chubby Brown here, perhaps him trying to be philosophical rather than mocking, but either way the end result works, Dark humour at its best and worse, cheers David
Bell Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 8:52 AM
She never laughed that one.
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