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Lost Dreams

A melancholy moon shone upon the earth.
Shadows lingered upon rows of tombstones.
I searched for solace in the vast cemetery
But alas, I found none to heal my wounds.

Days had passed with echoes of grief as I looked on.
Somewhere lay my love long buried, as birds above
Sang their melancholy melodies of death’s sorrow.

I sought amongst the ghastly ghosts of yesterday,
Remnants of the dark death that took so many lives.
Cursed Covid has taken many innumerable lives.

I sat on a tomb, beneath a cross, as tears flowed.
Echoes of our laughter seem to be heard in mockery.
The tall cypresses sent shadows across and I felt cold.

A soft breeze flowed all around and dusk began to fall.
Somewhere a beastly bell sounded its closing time.
Stars twinkled indifferently as a half-moon turned red.

Behind me, my love remained buried and lost.
There was no hope of finding any sort of peace.
I left the dead to mourn the dead and went home.
After all, tomorrow is another day, hopefully better.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 11:23 AM
Dear Victor, your grief is expressed with evocative and emotive imagery that is rich, deep and vivid in soulful language. Your last line is a ray of light in the dark depths of despair. A sad beauty colored in shades of melancholy. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
M  Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 2:12 AM
Such a beautifully sad poem Victor! Debx
Anaya Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 12:25 PM
Grief is love with nowhere to go, I read that somewhere. The curse of covid will remain in our minds "Stars twinkled indifferently as a half-moon turned red" many emotions anger, despair. Beautiful free verse, xhugs
Jones Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:08 AM
Wow this dives into the annals of grief and really engages the heart but then leaves with optimism for tomorrow! Well done.
Empress Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 6:50 AM
Dear victor, i can feel the grief and emotions flowing through your words woven here in such eloquence. Its never easy losing loved ones, and theres this emptiness when they leave, and sometimes when it is too sudden too. I cant evn imagine the pain that youd have endured. I just lost a 28 year old cousin few days ago. And it was so shocking and painful. But God knows the best, and we pray they find eternal peace. Sending you light always
Kannan Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 2:04 AM
This is so deep, Victor... But you have beautifully expressed the emotions... Loved it...
Williams Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 10:04 PM
A truly touching poem that speaks to so many of us. Covid left its mark as you say, many of us lost loved ones. 'I left the dead to mourn the dead and went home. After all, tomorrow is another day, hopefully better.' Always better, as they say time heals all wounds dear Victor Love and Hugs
Wraith Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 9:20 AM
A hauntingly beautiful tale Victor. I too often find myself seeking solace as I saunter through the cemetery; it is a melancholic meandering, wrought with life’s contemplations. However, it does bring perspective to my often weary eyes. “Let death have the dead and let the living have life.” -Edward
Bowring Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 9:19 AM
Such a touching poem dear Victor that pulls the reader in by heartstrings. You have deeply expressed so much here and such vivid descriptions too transport us to the cemetery of emptiness and loneliness. A place where lost dreams haunt. A very moving piece lovely friend. Hugs to you x
Rolland Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 12:44 AM
so touching and beautiful, i too seek somtimes solace in cemeteries, "deads are so quiet", thank you for the heartbreaking poem yann
George Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 9:43 PM
A deeply moving poem dear Victor. I can sense your heartache and frustration. A cemetery is a sad place where we find no solace, especially if someone so close to us lie buried there. I can sense every fleeting thought that must have passed through your mind while being in that graveyard.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Heartache difficult to heal. Scars for life in our heart, my lovely Victor. You wrote a very big profound poem to kneel down and pray for the beloved lost ones. I enjoyed to read a piece written with the humility you always do. Bravo!
One Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 1:26 PM
A lot of emotions in this one.. Deeply expressed..
Manassian Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 6:43 AM
My heart aches to read this. I have loved ones who lie sleeping in cemeteries, but then again... they are alive and well in our hearts.
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 5:18 AM
We can sense your anguish in this poem about losing the meaning of a dream and being left to fend for oneself, Victor. Great poem
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 10:58 PM
We cannot turn back the loss of love but find treasures from its glory...sensitively essayed with emotive lines...well done, victor...huggs, buddy!
Buehler Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 9:27 PM
Your stirring poem conveys the despair of grief very well, Victor. Grief can be so difficult. I really liked the story's ending, and I'm glad that he found the inner strength to go on.
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 1:22 PM
Heart felt and poignant writing, Victor.
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 1:09 PM
- A beautiful emotional poem, Victor - hugs
Greenhough Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 10:23 AM
This is sad. I hope it isn't true. Quite a few people died of covid. I feel sorrow for him.
Rodgers Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Dear Victor, Truly touching! I believe your haunting verses transported me to a somber graveyard. A place where grief lives among the tombstones and melancholy melodies. I loved how your emotive language leaves an indelible mark on the soul. Losing those close to us is so hard. - Blessings, My friend, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 2:46 AM
Yes, some people that my husband and I knew died from COVID, most of them very close together. All three of us here in this house got sick with it, but we all survived. We each had different bodily systems effected by it. My husband had lung problems, and my grandson and I had stomach problems. My grandson was only really sick maybe three days, but I was sick a month. All of us have reoccurring symptoms ever since. Sara K
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 2:38 AM
We're are where we should be, the loved ones who are gone we'll find and they'll hold us, the love ones here we'll find and they'll take us. Peace Victor, Aloha, William
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June 13, 2024 at 1:25 AM
It’s very sad when dreams are lost and one’s left on their own, we feel the pain of your loss in your poem Victor. Take care, Beryl
Vaso Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 11:11 PM
This is so beautiful Victor, sadly I feel it right now.
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