Lost Dream

Thorn pierced to your heart
Betrayal of love
Mercy cry heard loud,
You're unforgiving
Trust I broke, sinner.

Pleading eyes now
Hoping for light
But sun you hide
Vanishing still.

Head tilted,
Farewell sign
My hands lame.

Tears peek
To lost

Dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Tugaff Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 9:38 AM
Hi Theresa, Fantastic work on this poem. I love it. Ernie
Jordan Avatar
August 24, 2008 at 4:28 AM
Teresita - Wonderful job on this poem - great use of the form - God bless
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