Lost Children

An old unkempt field
The eerie sounds of children playing
drifting in the summer wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bagnall Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Very well written, I'm not sure you wrote it the same way I read it. I feel there is something sad about this poem, almost like the sounds are memories of the children playing in the field, but now grown up and left.
Nutter Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 2:56 AM
Long to hear the childrens, voices in the summer wind once again. Seem as though they are all sheltered inside playing video's. Excellent enjoyable read.
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