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Lost Children

An old unkempt field The eerie sounds of children playing drifting in the summer wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/11/2010 4:55:00 AM
Very well written, I'm not sure you wrote it the same way I read it. I feel there is something sad about this poem, almost like the sounds are memories of the children playing in the field, but now grown up and left.
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Date: 5/11/2010 2:56:00 AM
Long to hear the childrens, voices in the summer wind once again. Seem as though they are all sheltered inside playing video's. Excellent enjoyable read.
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