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Lost Cause

A plethora of knots came undone, An amazing friendship torn apart, Now she holds the loaded gun, With it pointed straight at my heart, Heavy clouds block the sun, You were a lost cause from the very start.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 4/24/2025 9:24:00 AM
Lost friendship can be just a devastating as lost love. You've written that so well here with a metaphor(i hope lol) that rings true to the pain of it. Xo
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Date: 4/23/2025 9:15:00 AM
So sad when friendships end, Congrats on your win
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