Lost At Sea

Ripples on the surface
Movement underneath
Fishes swimming freely
Calm waters all around
The deepness hides a secret
of loss and misery
Our thoughts and wishes spared
for loved ones lost not found
now lying at the bottom
of the great blue sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 11:09 AM
This strikes a chord as I live on the Isle of Man and i can really relate to this. Fabulous write. Jan xxx
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Will keep everything crossed for you - that poem still makes me giggle especially about HR. Jan xxxx
Carter Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Thanks Jan, by the way I had meeting, not that bad actually but I'll see how things go.....ta. Rob
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