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Lost At Sea

Ripples on the surface Movement underneath Fishes swimming freely Calm waters all around The deepness hides a secret of loss and misery Our thoughts and wishes spared for loved ones lost not found now lying at the bottom of the great blue sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/13/2014 11:09:00 AM
This strikes a chord as I live on the Isle of Man and i can really relate to this. Fabulous write. Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2014 3:38:00 PM
Will keep everything crossed for you - that poem still makes me giggle especially about HR. Jan xxxx
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Rob Carter
Date: 3/13/2014 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Jan, by the way I had meeting, not that bad actually but I'll see how things go.....ta. Rob

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