Lost At Sea

Physcologically, I gotta be
advancing like technology
enhancing from a model t
into the helicopter seat
but then i got a chopper beat
call in the mach three
have it fly in over the top of me
i'm coming up in this game
like taking property in monopoly
i hold it down like poverty
See logically i'm obviously
the prodigy of this prophecy
i got a lot on my mind
so i feel i got a lot to teach
like it was ancient philosophy
drop a beat & talk beliefs
then start to preach to the hard to reach
educate them properly
& before their brain is obsolete
sculpt that thing like pottery
so instead of makin a mockery
of the things you see when you watch tv
just stop to see then possibly
you wont feel like your lost at sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Žilic Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 9:55 AM
Haha, a skill with words never before heard :D
Collins Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 8:52 AM
I love your poem. It felt like a rap with an awesome beat!...A
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June 4, 2012 at 8:57 PM
BRANDON ,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great night ;-) always ~PD ***
Britt Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 11:06 AM
omg I KNOW you're a rapper! lol the message is clear though: try to see the whole picture before jumping to conclusions which I ABSOLUTELY agree with <3
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May 25, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Brandon. - Hope you will write, read and comments back alot of poem with us....have fun. - love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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May 24, 2012 at 7:53 PM
this jst raw i have nothing but praise for this keep this up
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