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Lost At Sea

Physcologically, I gotta be advancing like technology enhancing from a model t into the helicopter seat but then i got a chopper beat call in the mach three have it fly in over the top of me i'm coming up in this game like taking property in monopoly i hold it down like poverty See logically i'm obviously the prodigy of this prophecy i got a lot on my mind so i feel i got a lot to teach like it was ancient philosophy drop a beat & talk beliefs then start to preach to the hard to reach educate them properly & before their brain is obsolete sculpt that thing like pottery so instead of makin a mockery of the things you see when you watch tv just stop to see then possibly you wont feel like your lost at sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/5/2012 9:55:00 AM
Haha, a skill with words never before heard :D
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Date: 6/5/2012 8:52:00 AM
I love your poem. It felt like a rap with an awesome beat!...A
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Date: 6/4/2012 8:57:00 PM
BRANDON ,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great night ;-) always ~PD ***
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:06:00 AM
omg I KNOW you're a rapper! lol the message is clear though: try to see the whole picture before jumping to conclusions which I ABSOLUTELY agree with <3
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Date: 5/25/2012 3:21:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup Brandon. - Hope you will write, read and comments back alot of poem with us....have fun. - love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/24/2012 7:53:00 PM
this jst raw i have nothing but praise for this keep this up
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