Lost At Sea

Your patronizing comments
A magnet near my compass
Giving me false hope

By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 12, 2010 at 3:24 PM
Negativity encompassing directionless tomorrows >> interesting and clever Senyru >> James
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