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lost and heartbroken

Lost in the labyrinth of my mind, Bound by despair, with no respite to find. My heart's chained to this life of strife, Though all around me, family tries, To break through my resistance and unite. But I push them away, despite their plight, Fear of rejection gnaws at my heart. Dad's faith in me seems distant and apart, Sister struggles to comprehend my pain, Trapped in repetition, my story unfolds, The same mistakes, the same role. Mom tries her best, but I stumble and fall, Yet I persist in this cycle cold.

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Date: 7/15/2025 1:58:00 PM
Hi Robert, welcome to Poetry Soup! I like how you wrote in a simple but expressive way and added in a few rhymes. Looking forward to your next poem.
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robert cruz
Date: 7/15/2025 2:03:00 PM
new poem coming out today just for you twin thx for the feedback funna post the poem from the poem book of mine thank you
Date: 7/15/2025 1:01:00 PM
hey guys author here any feedback will be nice i am a 9th grade student published 2 times in my school book rambunctious press volume 7-8 name is robert cruz thank you any type of support money wise or anything like that helps feedback is very appreciated thank you
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