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Lost and Found

He is lost in the midst of an evergreen wood turned around in a coffin of trees and of mist while the faint light of day slowly drifts towards the night and a fear grips his heart as his hopes fade away. As the darkness approaches he knows he must act find a way to stay warm to survive through the night and while gathering wood he can hear a bear growl and the rustling stir of a nocturnal cat. But he beats his fears down as he makes a stick hut then in feverish prayer he collapses to sleep filled with tormented dreams and great terrors unknown where dark demons are wrestling angelic hosts. He is startled awake by a primitive howl then a grueling attack and a ripping of flesh but his pain melts away as his body ascends to a place they call Paradise, lost but now found. Written on 1/7/2018 Anapestic Tetrameter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/20/2018 3:26:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Laura - Keep on writing on, my friend - blessings! :-)
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Date: 1/17/2018 9:14:00 PM
Beautifully done poem, Laura. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/15/2018 9:54:00 AM
congratulations Laura...very descriptive and rhythmic writing...love it!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/27/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thanks, David :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/27/2018 7:04:00 PM
Thanks, David :)
Date: 1/15/2018 8:25:00 AM
Laura, congrats on your well deserved win. John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/15/2018 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, John :)
Date: 1/14/2018 2:21:00 PM
wow amazing sweet Laura! congrats ;)-luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/15/2018 6:18:00 PM
Thanks, Laura Loo :)
Date: 1/7/2018 10:44:00 AM
That was an inspiring one. In the end, he finds paradise! I am seeing many of the entries in this contest based on things fearful. I need to check it again. Maybe I did mine wrong. Anyway, your meter was really good and I think you have a great chance of being on the winners' list.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/7/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! I think there is no limits on what you can write about, so I guess this meter may lend itself to a type of diologue that tells stories of fear and suspense?

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