Lost and Found

He is lost in the midst of an evergreen wood
turned around in a coffin of trees and of mist
while the faint light of day slowly drifts towards the night
and a fear grips his heart as his hopes fade away.

As the darkness approaches he knows he must act
find a way to stay warm to survive through the night 
and while gathering wood he can hear a bear growl
and the rustling stir of a nocturnal cat.

But he beats his fears down as he makes a stick hut
then in feverish prayer he collapses to sleep 
filled with tormented dreams and great terrors unknown 
where dark demons are wrestling angelic hosts.

He is startled awake by a primitive howl
then a grueling attack and a ripping of flesh 
but his pain melts away as his body ascends
to a place they call Paradise, lost but now found. 






Written on 1/7/2018
Anapestic Tetrameter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 3:26 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Laura - Keep on writing on, my friend - blessings! :-)
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January 17, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Beautifully done poem, Laura. Congrats on your win.
Mohn Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 9:54 AM
congratulations Laura...very descriptive and rhythmic writing...love it!
Leiser Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Thanks, David :)
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January 27, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Thanks, David :)
Gondolf Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Laura, congrats on your well deserved win. John
Leiser Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Thank you, John :)
Scars Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 2:21 PM
wow amazing sweet Laura! congrats ;)-luloo
Leiser Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Thanks, Laura Loo :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:44 AM
That was an inspiring one. In the end, he finds paradise! I am seeing many of the entries in this contest based on things fearful. I need to check it again. Maybe I did mine wrong. Anyway, your meter was really good and I think you have a great chance of being on the winners' list.
Leiser Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Thanks Andrea! I think there is no limits on what you can write about, so I guess this meter may lend itself to a type of diologue that tells stories of fear and suspense?
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