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Lost and Found

Gunfire wounded
temple time passes by
fleeing dominance, anger,
lovers linger lost
freedom glorified, homage;
saffron incense calls prayer.

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Dver Ki

February 8, 2009 at 8:32 PM

Very nice, a bit sad, but well written. Thanks for commenting on my poem, ill try and improve my rhyming skills :)

K K Iloduba Jnr

January 29, 2009 at 2:16 PM

paucity of words.i tink i ve an idea of what u re trying to say.bet d message could ve bn more coloful if u had employed a few more words.i horde words too.tnx 4ur wonderful commentaries on ma works.u observations drive me on. could u pls educate me more on this sedoka form of poetry?

Raul Moreno

January 29, 2009 at 2:08 PM

Deep message written here Deborah, nice job...Raul

Derrick Burton

January 29, 2009 at 1:09 PM

Love this and how it is so short, yet has this powerful meaning of damage done, now there is great repenting to be done because of it. [wink] I read poetry for a living so I have this idea of what it is saying. enjoyed reading this and thank you for pleasant comments as well.

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