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I’m lost, the snow’s so deep, red scarf left as a mark, but gone, I need to nap, a busy night, Santa and Rudolph will miss me Sleep, I must sleep, so tie my shoe around a tree with thorn, Must prepare for dread, for what lies ahead, a villager passing heard My sleepy voice, and from beneath a steep pile of snow peeped out A blue sleeved arm and shoe-less foot, so he awakened me, I would freeze in this bitter breeze, a hot glass of milk is What you need, the stranger said, so tearfully I did explain, I feared a wolf with fang, poor tired Santa forgot to head count, Please help, all I know is address North Pole, so elf and stranger Walked hand in hand, leaving footprints in the snow like sand, Was this stranger assigned, of course we know he was, with speedy swirl, Found themselves in Santa’s house, beside his spouse, address North Pole. A miracle Santa declared and looked around, but no-one was there! Competition Entry: Footprints Dated: 02/05/2021 Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 6/5/2021 3:14:00 AM
What a sweet miraculous beautiful poem that I picked to read now dear Jenni... Thoroughly enjoyed reading this awesome story my friend... Have a lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 5/26/2021 4:54:00 PM
Ah a guardian angel sent by God to save the little elf. A special Christmas Miracle. Lovely imaginative write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:27:00 PM
So true, great you noticed that the angel sent by God to help the elf was significant and the focal point of the story. Best wishes my friend thank you for your lovely comments, Jennifer - hugs and blessings.
Date: 5/15/2021 4:38:00 PM
I see this indeed made the winner list. Belated Congrats. and thanks for viewing several of my poems yesterday.
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:20:00 PM
Hi AndreA, thank-you so much for your wonderful comments, much appreciated my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Date: 5/12/2021 2:46:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, dear Jenny - Congratulations on your win :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:16:00 PM
Hey Sunshine Smile so good to see you, are you back home and resting. Your comments always make me smile and think how lucky I am to have such a wonderful friend from across the pond. Hugs Jennifer.
Date: 5/7/2021 11:41:00 AM
Hey Jennifer, I hope you are alright?
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:18:00 PM
Always does your cute caring character comes to the fore my darling friend. Yes I'm fine but my time has to be divided between poetry and work. Hugs Paghunda , Jennifer.
Date: 5/7/2021 8:12:00 AM
Very well done Jennifer. It pushed all my buttons. the praises below are well deserved. - Ken
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:29:00 PM
Ken, thank you for a wonderful comment, much appreciated. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 5/6/2021 11:08:00 PM
Love this verse, Jennifer, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:20:00 PM
Thank-you Eve, - I did edit and repost, but as it was allowed, I thought it would be best as an option for time. Hugs my dear friend, Jennifer.
Date: 5/5/2021 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jennifer! A wonderful metaphor for miracles all wrapped up in the symbol of self-sacrificing love in Santa Claus with Christmas as the background. So creatively poetic! Really enjoyed it! Hope you are well as you prepare to celebrate the miracle of miracles. Blessings to you. Happy Easter dear friend.
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:25:00 PM
Hi Sam, reading to a non-poet is not really the ideal situation especially when there job is editing of newspapers, magazines, government contracts and MBA papers, as their english is perfection in all the above, but we are allowed poetic licence as that is what poetry is all about. A wonderful comment thank-you Sam, Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/5/2021 11:12:00 AM
A charming creative piece Jennifer. Enjoyed it. love phyl
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:27:00 PM
Phil, a great comment, forgive me for not replying sooner and for my visits being a little sparse, but we run a business from home and it is taxing to do work and poetry. I love your poetry. Hugs, Jennifer
Date: 5/5/2021 2:16:00 AM
Charmingly reminiscing Christmas past. Beautifully written dearest, Jennifer. Good luck! Hugs xxx
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:29:00 PM
Thank-you Demetrios, a wonderful comment, thank you for your good luck wishes, I got a 2nd in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/4/2021 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:30:00 PM
Thank-you Alex, don't think we know one another will be visiting you soon. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/4/2021 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations Jenn... That's a wonderful sweet story... Loved it... Imagery too is great
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:31:00 PM
Thank-you Pagunda, you always say the sweetest things, Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/4/2021 7:53:00 AM
What a cute story, Jennifer! I enjoyed your creative take on the contest and I smiled while reading your poem. There were many extraordinary poems in this contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:34:00 PM
I enjoyed your contest Carolyn, in fact very much indeed. It was a challenge shortening a 27 line poem to 14 lines but fun also. Be well dear friend, and thank-you for my 2nd win, was thrilled. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/3/2021 5:23:00 PM
A most enjoyable read Jennifer, best wishes for the contest. God bless… Belle
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:35:00 PM
Thank-you Belle, glad you enjoyed my poem, keep well and writing your awesome poems. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/3/2021 2:53:00 PM
this is a sweet one for her contest, dear. Hope to see it on the winners' list.
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:37:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, dear friend, such a kind thing to say. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/2/2021 1:30:00 PM
Nice one Jenny, really good with nice imagery and a nice tale well told but just one thing, how can you write about snow when you don't get any in SA? Hope you've had a nice weekend, Take care, Gordon
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:39:00 PM
We do, once every 10 years! Then offices, shops business all close as even adults play in the snow. A beautiful comment Gordon. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/2/2021 12:01:00 PM
Best for the contest, sweet lady. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:42:00 PM
Hi Gina, thank-you for all your visits and lovely comments. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/2/2021 10:39:00 AM
Now you've got me humming Christmas carols lol. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend, hope alls well. Tom
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Date: 5/12/2021 11:43:00 PM
Hi Tom, Maybe this Christmas coming could be more relaxed, but at the moment we are going through our third wave. Hope all the family stays well, Blessings, Jennifer.

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