Lost

A cloudless day, should have been warm but the frigid southern roaring 40’s cut like flailing daggers into the skin, leaving bones and joints to succumb to the maddening icy grip of winter’s callous fists.  Even the Curlew, who, usually undaunted by such torrid tempest, seek shelter among the rocks and crevices that dot the sea, battered coastal fringe.
The boy was lost….
Melaleuca trees stand century, like gnarled soldiers gathered around the fallen, giving full acquiescence to the polar blasts that bend and twist them further still.  Their wispy fingers reaching down to engulf the child with grasping hands, beckoning further into their forest lair.  The only sounds that can be heard is the deafening roar of tree and wind as they battle in the canopies above.  
Panic fueled anxiety long ago gave way to terror, since replaced by resignation as night enclosed the restless child, who battles the lure of sleep against fear.  For in his mind he believes that in this foreboding place, creatures beyond the realm of humanity will visit unspeakable harm upon his being.  Their prying eyes ever present awaiting the moment he slips into unconscious sleep to exact their egregious deeds.
When dawn arrives the child awakes to the gentle touch of sunshine’s warmth.  Like God himself has stroked his face and chased the demons from his thoughts.  His weary eyelids flick open like snow pea slits as he adjusts his sunken, fretful eyes.  A smiling face before him bends and before realisation takes hold in his mind the words escape his cracked and tortured lips.  “Daddy”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/11/2016 9:14:00 PM
Yes wonderful descriptive story Craig I was caught up in it while I read it.
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Date: 9/12/2016 2:11:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and kind review Darlene.
Date: 9/2/2016 5:09:00 PM
what a wonderful descriptive story Craig:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/3/2016 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Jan.
Date: 8/16/2016 8:17:00 PM
Have you written a book yet. Jolly good stuff. Hear the Olympic coverage over there is not good. Sky here is good apparently but we gave it up because of cost. Not too bothered though it has been tarnished for me and hard to justify huge cost. Anyway really like your latest effort. What happened to your swim team? regards David Regards David.
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Date: 8/17/2016 1:55:00 AM
Cheers, David, no book and I don't know what happened to the swim team. Pressure I guess. Take care mate.
Date: 8/14/2016 10:26:00 PM
Craig, I enjoyed this dramatic and descriptive write! Well done! Blessings!
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:59:00 AM
Thank you Kim for the visit. Regards, Craig
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