Lost

Lost

What to write: that night, 
my mind went blind. 
For a blank sheet of paper 
proved my thoughts darker, 
darker than a blank sheet 
of paper in a hollow, dark room, 
a dark room that became 
for me a random living room, 
pushing me to be a dweller. 
I knew no way to describe
my slithering snake’s actions 
and the kisses of hell’s flame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 28, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Christopher, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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November 24, 2015 at 12:41 PM
I like this poem in one sentence you're composed It builds to a heightened drama. Congrats. daver
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