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My ship has sunk down I survived but dare not swim Save me from evil
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Mehta Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 5:02 AM
Very inventive thought, congrats on the win
Lindley Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 10:04 PM
Congrats on your win!!!
Nance Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:31 PM
Intense, such a strong poem, I enjoyed this one so much, Tread water, save or surrender, ship has sunk, will you sink under. Grats on your win! well done!
Smith Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 7:06 PM
Congrats my friend..hugs Tim
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 3:10 PM
like a small tale in your haiku! Congrats for win.
A   Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:33 AM
Anoucheka, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~
Palmer Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 10:49 AM
S.O.S,wonderful write Anoucheka
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