Lost

To put it all correct I don't know how I've gone too far... To turn back I Can not A burning heart I have A lump stucked in my throat Just I don't know how to put it correct It seems all gone wrong Neither turning back nor going forward I see no light at all In an abyss I am with no out or in...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/28/2025 4:27:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 1/22/2016 7:57:00 PM

UPEKSHA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 4/28/2014 5:49:00 AM

No loss nothing to correct! A good throw!