Lost

I'm losing everyone Or is it I who is lost? I'm hurting everyone Or is it I who is hurt? I'm ruining everyone Or is it I who is ruined? I'm certain they are better off without me, everyone Or is it I who is better off without them? Who is lost? Who is found? Who is sure? Who is doubt? Who knows the answers? No one but the lost, the found, the sure, and the not.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2014 5:41:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Alex :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2014 10:18:00 PM

Alex, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2014 6:34:00 PM

Interesting, and wow...I was all of theee above... Alex, ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Louise Holley

Date: 4/9/2014 10:58:00 AM

This is excellent. I love the ending!

Alex Perry
Date: 4/9/2014 10:59:00 AM

Thank you so much.