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"lost"

i'm lost....By choice? By fate? By emotions? By love? I'm lost... unsure not confused not puzzled I'm lost. I've said all i wanted, all i had to say i expected a response, an utter sound but got none The words weren't wrong, or deep, it wasn't even a riddle at all. I expected a response...but got none. An answer is all i want. it doesn't have to be right. it doesn't haveto perfect... just an answer. it's what i need to settle my mind, to cure my heart, to fix my soul. I'm not insecure,i just feel exposed. what i feel now is like i'm without clothes I feel naked, bare, vulnerable. I'm out in the open, a sitting duck My skin feels antsy, as i wait to be shot So shoot me now, for i am lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/13/2018 9:30:00 AM
Enjoy your writing.
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Date: 10/25/2010 9:34:00 AM
love your write on the sense and feel of being lost, a path awaits you, enjoyed your write,..P.D.
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Date: 10/25/2010 4:08:00 AM
Interesting poetry Dominic, it sure leaves the reader captured >> James
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Date: 10/24/2010 10:36:00 PM
really enjoyed your poetry this evening
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