Lost ..

i lost my self
when i was a soldier
in a land war away

i lost my self
to protect people
who didn''t neat it

i lost my self
when i came back
in my one land

becase no one ondersand
what i did there
protect and serve

words of no meaning
people who cane protect them self
and don''t neat us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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February 28, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Aukje, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 7, 2016 at 8:55 AM
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