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Sponsor : Craig Cornish date submitted : 26/6/25 ___________ Lost in echoes of darkened time dampened, dithering, dazed wet withered witches mime a dime fearful, I’m mazed or crazed Calling Divinity, voicebox shut eyelids glued, nostrils stuffed lips zipped with copper thread eardrums worrisome waned Where are chiming confluent clocks highways and internet ? shadows dim whisper, “badly blocked, pointless you bet, get set !” Surely I paid every debt learnt my lessons very well trusted faith, no futile fracas rose from every slothful rut ~ LOST, part of adventurous life to find own lucid laws undoing inner sceptic strife opens all barred doors …

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Date: 7/8/2025 10:35:00 AM
Being a fan of alliteration, I admired yours, random, not overdone. Love the last stanza for its positivity. Patience proved the wisdom of loss despite a lack of "adventures" which had their own perceived disadvantages. Super summary line - "opens all barred doors." Liked it very much.
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 7/8/2025 10:58:00 AM
ThkU for detail of comment, Reason: very reasonable xx.
Date: 6/25/2025 9:04:00 PM
So blocked we are yet so explosive, "Surely I paid every debt, learnt my lessons very well" ----loved this, power to you Ghairo and our inner sceptic strife
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 6/25/2025 10:16:00 PM
Ditto, BJ. ThkU 4 read. Hav a goodie day/night.

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