Lost

I spin and twirl
fall and unfurl
whirling round and round
upside down
thrown and tossed
forever lost
pulled and battered
pushed and splattered
caught in the squall
the chaos of it all
turned inside out
bounced about
completely unravelled
emotionally frazzled
broken and worn
shredded and torn
chucked on the ground
never again found

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/8/2009 3:08:00 AM
Wurling spinning ... this was wonderful thanks for taking me on the journey wonderful write congrates on being featured this week .. Love Jayne x x x
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Date: 8/6/2009 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem I enjoyed this! Laura :)
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Date: 8/6/2009 12:53:00 PM
Congrats Kat on your featured write, "Lost." Vince
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:07:00 PM
Kat - Wow that about says it all home girl - way to break it down,rhyme and flow were outstanding to say the least - congrats on being featured I certainly see that as our blessing - God Bless you hon, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 1:05:00 PM
Interesting rhyme scheme......Congrats on the feature.......:JP]
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:58:00 AM
Sorry for the typo ( Kat) ! james
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:51:00 AM
Kate,...this poem,..its a coincidence i'm sure,...but that Pilot they just discovered from ( 1991 ) burried in the dessert,..Micheal Scott a Navy air pilot,...I just can now picture his demise through your poem,..I'm sure that you did'nt write it this way,..but it really lit me for the go ahead !! Great poetry my friend,..and congrats on its feature !!!! james
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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Date: 4/29/2009 12:20:00 PM
This was such a joy to read, so imagine how great it was to write, great poem, James,xx
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Date: 4/17/2009 5:26:00 PM
You must sense my turmoil great write. Thank you for the comment on Real Mother
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Date: 4/17/2009 10:20:00 AM
Brilliant Kat! ...punchy phrases beautifully presented and rhymed... BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith (PS you'd probably enjoy my poem 'Out Of Time!')
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