Lost

I spin and twirl
fall and unfurl
whirling round and round
upside down
thrown and tossed
forever lost
pulled and battered
pushed and splattered
caught in the squall
the chaos of it all
turned inside out
bounced about
completely unravelled
emotionally frazzled
broken and worn
shredded and torn
chucked on the ground
never again found
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Eggins Avatar
August 8, 2009 at 3:08 AM
Wurling spinning ... this was wonderful thanks for taking me on the journey wonderful write congrates on being featured this week .. Love Jayne x x x
Mckenzie Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 7:27 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem I enjoyed this! Laura :)
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Congrats Kat on your featured write, "Lost." Vince
Jordan Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 8:07 PM
Kat - Wow that about says it all home girl - way to break it down,rhyme and flow were outstanding to say the least - congrats on being featured I certainly see that as our blessing - God Bless you hon, MJ
Pickett Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 1:05 PM
Interesting rhyme scheme......Congrats on the feature.......:JP]
Peranteau Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 7:58 AM
Sorry for the typo ( Kat) ! james
Peranteau Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 7:51 AM
Kate,...this poem,..its a coincidence i'm sure,...but that Pilot they just discovered from ( 1991 ) burried in the dessert,..Micheal Scott a Navy air pilot,...I just can now picture his demise through your poem,..I'm sure that you did'nt write it this way,..but it really lit me for the go ahead !! Great poetry my friend,..and congrats on its feature !!!! james
Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 4:35 AM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
Fraser Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 12:20 PM
This was such a joy to read, so imagine how great it was to write, great poem, James,xx
Nutter Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 5:26 PM
You must sense my turmoil great write. Thank you for the comment on Real Mother
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 10:20 AM
Brilliant Kat! ...punchy phrases beautifully presented and rhymed... BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith (PS you'd probably enjoy my poem 'Out Of Time!')
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