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Welcome to the woods,

take nothing but pictures;

leave nothing but footprints,

kill nothing but time.

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It was a lovely day for a long walk, when down a path I found a wall of rock; it was thick with twisting ivy and moss, and I stood thinking- should I climb and cross; the placed stones were very old and leaf strewn, and from the hidden trees birds sang a tune; perhaps a forgotten property wall, I followed- for my mind it did enthrall; deep in the woods my quiet footsteps fell, it seemed I was under a magic spell; until I stood at a weather-stained gate, it opened though it was rusty ornate; a step within was a garden tangled, where I became part of the entangled; I walked for hours thinking I am lost, perhaps that wall- I should not have crossed. ____________________________ October 9, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Lost Copyright Protected, ID 20-1293-861-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, A Wall In The Woods sponsor, Craig Cornish, NA

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Date: 10/10/2020 9:20:00 AM
Who knows...but you did cross...Enjoyed the read my friend...Always a lovely feel to your write...
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Constance La France
Date: 10/10/2020 4:45:00 PM
Arturo, thank you for the visit and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 10/9/2020 10:59:00 AM
That was such a beautiful write Constance! I love your take on the wall. Brilliant.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2020 1:44:00 PM
Mark, thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance
Date: 10/9/2020 10:41:00 AM
Hello Constance La France, I felt like I was walking this path with you. No we should not gone that route. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2020 6:55:00 AM
Hello It is okay to be adventuresConstance la France, you are welcome. It is okay to be adventures, yet sometimes we should stay on the pass. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2020 1:46:00 PM
Darlene, thanks for the comment, at times I am too adventurous for my own good, should stay on the path _Constance
Date: 10/9/2020 9:52:00 AM
Fantastic!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/9/2020 10:39:00 AM
Kim, thank you for the visit and the compliment, appreciate _Constance

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