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You have written with your heart And shared it with, those worlds apart Bared your soul in every verse For us, a blessing, for you a curse With pain you struggled to be heard As we skimmed through every other word Perhaps it's just not your time For you to share what's on your mind One day all poets get their due I'm quiet sure, that so shall you If not by contest winning Soup Jan might share with you some poop It always makes me feel like a winner ! Hi Jan lol

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Date: 7/27/2015 10:55:00 AM
HEy JEeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrry, you got me giggling here!!! I love your humor too.. :D!!! :D! witty as always!!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:14:00 PM
Tehehehe! I love this oh so clever piece! I enjoyed the chuckle! Superb write! Pandita
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Date: 7/25/2015 4:52:00 PM
Don't talk poop around here. I am trying to eat :)
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 7/25/2015 9:07:00 PM
Nope. I don't hold for anybody :)
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/25/2015 8:18:00 PM
Well why not eat later---just askin' lol
Date: 7/25/2015 3:51:00 PM
aww Jerry this sure made me smile especially the final two lines - you know me and pooh poetry go together hand in hand in fact one day I may change my name to J A Milne lol. Posted 2 poems today - so so different in their content lol in fact one extreme to the other:-) hugs jan xx 7 and faves and thank you again for your support:-) xx
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Date: 7/25/2015 4:25:00 PM
lol yes in hindsight i think I will pass on that one :-) hugs jan xx
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/25/2015 4:23:00 PM
I'll Have to check them out, thanks for you support----I'm not sure pooh "Hand in Hand" is a good idea though.....God Bless