Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

Loss Soup

You have written with your heart
And shared it with, those worlds apart
Bared your soul in every verse
For us, a blessing, for you a curse
With pain you struggled to be heard
As we skimmed through every other word
Perhaps it's just not your time
For you to share what's on your mind
One day all poets get their due
I'm quiet sure, that so shall you
If not by contest winning Soup
Jan might share with you some poop

It always makes me feel like a winner ! Hi Jan lol

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 27, 2015 at 10:55 AM HEy JEeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrry, you got me giggling here!!! I love your humor too.. :D!!! :D! witty as always!!~Olive Eloisa

Pandita Sietesantos July 26, 2015 at 4:14 PM Tehehehe! I love this oh so clever piece! I enjoyed the chuckle! Superb write! Pandita

Toquyen Harrell July 25, 2015 at 4:52 PM Don't talk poop around here. I am trying to eat :) Toquyen Harrell July 25, 2015 at 9:07 PM Nope. I don't hold for anybody :) Jerry T Curtis July 25, 2015 at 8:18 PM Well why not eat later---just askin' lol

Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 3:51 PM aww Jerry this sure made me smile especially the final two lines - you know me and pooh poetry go together hand in hand in fact one day I may change my name to J A Milne lol. Posted 2 poems today - so so different in their content lol in fact one extreme to the other:-) hugs jan xx 7 and faves and thank you again for your support:-) xx Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 4:25 PM lol yes in hindsight i think I will pass on that one :-) hugs jan xx Jerry T Curtis July 25, 2015 at 4:23 PM I'll Have to check them out, thanks for you support----I'm not sure pooh "Hand in Hand" is a good idea though.....God Bless