Loss of Winning

losing controls my thinking mind while everyone sits, waiting for what i might find imagination makes it all high i would love that to be true and i let out a searing sigh my face turns shades of blue of all my wasted time i need to do some choosing but when reality is sour as a lime im tired of always losing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 5, 2011 at 8:59 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Ethan. Love, Carol
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October 4, 2011 at 7:10 PM
Good flow and rhyming..Enjoyed reading this eve.
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October 4, 2011 at 7:10 PM
Sorry that I did not sign it..Sara
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