Loss of Innocence

cruel are whispers
          imploding our fantasies 
       more so ~ when soft spoke 

By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Such truth expressed in such few words. Nicely done, David!
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 12:50 PM
Heya Milton, thanks for the visit, I never understood breaking it to me gently, just never softened the blow, cheers David
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Woah a sublime poem in brevity! A fine intrigue. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Thank you zaynab, I will call in and check it out, cheers David
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