Krishnanand Guptar Poet Verse

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Loss of a Pearl

"You left footprints on my heart that can never be erased." - Unknown
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                                               Loss of a Pearl

                                 In the dim SHADOW of moonlight
                                 She MUTTERS her wrath in sorrow
                                   As she looks for her rare JEWEL 
                                   Called up to the GATE of heaven
                                    In the very prime of his youth:
                                    Who can restore such a jewel!
                                  Who can console such a mother!

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Sotto Poet March 24, 2025 at 12:05 PM Extremely poignant! The death of a child is an unforgiving experience for mom. It will immerse her in profound grief. Elegantly composed with the prompt phrases employed ingeniously. Congratulations on your top win placement, dear Krishnanand. Krishnanand Guptar March 24, 2025 at 11:45 PM Thank you a lot dear poet for your inspiring remarks and your kind wishes. I try to write with simple words without being pedestrian by attempting to place myself in the shoes of the subject- something i picked up from youthful days.....Wishing you plenty of light.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2025 at 2:27 AM - A beautiful and sensitive poem, Krishnanand - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Krishnanand Guptar March 24, 2025 at 3:21 AM Thanks a lot poetess for visiting my page, appreciating the above write and your kind wishes. These have raised my spirits high. Wish you a pleasant day with lots of sunshine.

Valsa George March 23, 2025 at 10:06 PM So touching! For a mother, the loss of her child is something uncompromising! It will plunge her into deep sorrow. Beautifully written with the prompt words used cleverly. Congratulations on your first place win, dear Krishnanand. Krishnanand Guptar March 23, 2025 at 10:52 PM Thank you dear friend for your visit to my page, for your touching words and for your kind wishes. These have raised my spirits and made up my day. Wish you plenty of sunshine and light in life.

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2025 at 11:34 PM Wow. You put those words together in such an awesome way. Krishnanand Guptar March 23, 2025 at 7:16 AM Thank you dear poetess for visiting my page and for appreciating the above write. Wish you a shining heath.

Ink Empress March 22, 2025 at 10:09 AM Such a poignant and heartfelt poem and great use of the prompt words in this too! I especially love “ She MUTTERS her wrath in sorrow As she looks for her rare JEWEL ” this made me feel the depth of grief so strongly! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always Krishnanand Guptar March 23, 2025 at 7:12 AM Thank you dear poetess for visiting my page, for appreciating the above write and your kind wishes. Your inspiring comments have raised my spirits high. May divine blessings ever rest with you.