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Loss For Words

what do you to say to someone when it seems like everything you say makes them mad? so I tried to walk away even though it hurts so much inside to. I wanted to show you that i care but maybe you don't want me to care because maybe you really don't care about me anymore. you practically pushed me out the door with your words and how you won't even look at me when I'm trying to talk to you. so I left, feeling worse than when I started...

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John Smith

Date: 8/17/2011 6:09:00 PM

Well put, but sounds to me it's over, pal. Women are like busses; another one will be along soon.

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/17/2011 4:20:00 PM

been there, and that's a tough one..TAH

Johnny Sumler

Date: 8/17/2011 4:14:00 PM

Deep and emotional write. The bright side is it seems like you've done nothing wrong so nothing to feel sad about. That persons loss, not yours! A very touching entry, enjoyed reading.