Lee Ramage Poet Free verse

Loss- By Poet Destroyer and Lee Ramage

LOSS
by~ LEE  RAMAGE

Just as poems paint a picture 
And songs take you on a journey 
How do I keep you with me 
Now that you’re no longer here 
I am pink clay and you are blue 
Mold and mix us together 
Separation is near impossible
An image drawn in my mind

by~ Poet Destroyer

The image you draw in my mind
Are enjoying the pink and blue flush clouds 
Clever as one on a calm night
Loss is never forever,
Mold me and hold me
You will see the journey will paint a picture near the sea
Twist me in to a midnight nursery rhyme
Mix us into the wilderness that will never separate
There you will find the perfect clay and create ~
A poem without loss and endless possibilities 

a collaboration with * Poet Destroyer

Written for "Collaborate with Me" contest
Won 3rd Place

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2011 at 12:09 PM Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest Lee. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2011 at 9:10 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D.,Lee

Michael J. Falotico September 17, 2011 at 8:19 AM Congrats on your win Lee!!! so happy to see this on the top...always Michael

Caryl Ramsdale September 17, 2011 at 3:28 AM Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "collaborate with me"...CR

Sara Kendrick September 16, 2011 at 8:24 PM Congrats on your win..I think that I read this one on P.D.'s page..Enjoyed..

Jack Horne September 16, 2011 at 1:06 PM Many congrats on all your wins, Lee : ) Lee Ramage September 16, 2011 at 5:47 PM Thanks Jack,you were the first to comment on this poem when Linda and I first wrote it. much appreciated, Lee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 16, 2011 at 7:58 AM Congrats Lee on a fantastic third place win with this awesome collab with PD.. enjoy luv..for excellent poetry.. Lee Ramage September 16, 2011 at 10:26 AM Thanks Linda-Marie, greatly appreciated, Linda is great to work with. Much appreciated. Lee

Poet Destroyer A September 16, 2011 at 1:33 AM Lee, Congratulations on your 3rd place win in my contest... it was a joy working with you.... thank you,..LINDA Lee Ramage September 16, 2011 at 10:25 AM Thanks Linda, I enjoy your style, well done. Thank you it is an honour to place 3rd in your contest and to share it with you. Thank you and congratulations to you also. Love Lee

Jack Horne September 13, 2011 at 11:46 AM You two write so well together - love it Lee Ramage September 13, 2011 at 10:01 PM Thanks so much Jack, greatly appreciated. Lee

Poet Destroyer A September 11, 2011 at 1:06 AM hi!!!! oooo! that was quick... i just looked over my poem, and i just added my last line.... Can you please add the line as well. thank you, and this was very fun and different... hope to see you stop by our poem.... take care,..LINDA Lee Ramage September 11, 2011 at 12:08 PM Hi Linda, sorry I am at Toronto film festival so was cleaning things up before I left, I've added the line. I am proficient if nothing else ;) I love the poem, thanks so much. Lee