Loss

I have always lived my life full of hope. I have come to realize that hope can be debilitating!

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Nocturnal Poet

December 19, 2013 at 10:25 AM

AWESOME ONE LINE SAID SO MUCH INDIRECTLY LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Michael Ainsley

October 20, 2013 at 10:34 AM

You know how they say;"Trust But Verify " Hope works on the same principle . You must put great energy and hard work into every hope. Become what you are looking for ; The truth is likes attract . You get what you give. Prospective is so important in seeing the world for what it is . On the other hand we all feel helpless at times.It will pass. And sometimes I talk to much so I'll be quiet now ; good luck Michael.

Poet Destroyer A

January 1, 2013 at 2:14 PM

Kirstie , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

Debbie Guzzi

November 29, 2012 at 11:28 AM

Alliteration always adds adjectives aditionally adverbs and any a-framed advise! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 19, 2011 at 11:28 AM

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Kirstie. Love and blessings, Carol

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

November 14, 2011 at 2:06 AM

Dear Kirstie, How very true I must apologize I forgot that POETRYSOUP deletes comments after 2 years I wasn't thinking I'm sure when YOU wrote YOUR first few POEMS YOU must have got Comments I'm sorry I wasn't one of them LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege... HG