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Loss

A sense of loss is a terrible feeling, it leaves a hallow pit in one's stomache, feelings of hoplessness daunts the spirit, Loss, most people don't want to know it and many run from it, Loss means that there has to be a new beginning, when the tables are turned around, and the promise of winning becomes intoxicating, Then loss would have been a passage paid for better things to come.......

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Date: 8/28/2010 11:01:00 AM
good work.win some lose some but live to fight another day
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Date: 6/1/2010 1:45:00 PM
we hope better things. john
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Date: 6/1/2010 11:03:00 AM
I totally agree with you Margeret. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2010 3:03:00 AM
Great poem..interesting perspective that I needed to see. Thank you Jodie
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Date: 5/31/2010 7:28:00 PM
enjoyed very sad, though we all have losses in our lives that are still raw, I think.
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Date: 5/31/2010 7:26:00 PM
how so often we deny it... the 5th line is true how you said many run from it... people don't know how to deal with such things.
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