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Loss

misty morning fog
weeping willow’s silent wail ...
misting eyes beseech






7/12/2022

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Andrea Dietrich

August 4, 2022 at 11:17 AM

I love this one. I see that you were fairly busy writing at least in June and July!

Mark Toney

August 4, 2022 at 7:28 PM

When my muse ignites verse that excites then you have me dead to rights—I'm a poet!

Anisha Dutta

August 4, 2022 at 7:46 AM

Perfect synchronisation with picture and poem. It’s charming. Have a good day .

Mark Toney

August 4, 2022 at 6:32 PM

Thank you, Anisha, for your gracious comment.

Bill Baker

July 26, 2022 at 2:16 PM

I like the way you put your poems in the pictures, Mark. Have a great week my friend. Bill

Mark Toney

July 26, 2022 at 2:40 PM

Bill, thank you for your encouraging comment. You have a nice week too.

Andrea Dietrich

July 21, 2022 at 10:19 AM

Just so beautiful, Mark. Keep up with haiku like this one!

Mark Toney

July 21, 2022 at 3:29 PM

Thank you, kind Andrea.

Deb M

July 15, 2022 at 10:00 PM

“Weeping willows silent wail”…..just love this line Mark! Lovely…..Debx

Mark Toney

July 15, 2022 at 10:27 PM

Thank you, Deb. You made my day!

Ann Foster

July 14, 2022 at 7:50 AM

Lovely... Ann

Mark Toney

July 14, 2022 at 12:39 PM

I appreciate that, Ann.

Mike Bayles

July 14, 2022 at 7:33 AM

Very nice, Mark.

Mark Toney

July 14, 2022 at 12:40 PM

Thank you, Mike, for your encouraging comment.

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