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Loss

Remember how once we walked through an olive grove, we heard no sound, not even our own footsteps. Remember how once we stood in a sea warmed by a hot sun, our weary feet soothed in warm shallows, our skin scorched. I remember the pain and sorrow of your departure to foreign lands, and cried for a future that could not be ours as the sun set alone. Now the mirror reflects back the empty years, loss and decay, the window no longer opens- it's latch rusted in place. Shall I open my door? venture outside? I cannot for my old coat hangs precariously on an ageing nail.

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Date: 1/3/2020 6:15:00 AM
Rags cannot conceal beauty. Otherwise we can always turn the coat inside out. Kind wishes, Kai
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Julie Achilles
Date: 1/4/2020 5:56:00 AM
thank you for your words, Julie
Date: 12/20/2019 4:57:00 AM
A heart yearning for love lost and dreaming of new love . Very well written dearest, Julie!
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Julie Achilles
Date: 12/21/2019 4:22:00 AM
Thank you so much. Julie

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