Loss

Remember how once we walked through an olive grove,
we heard no sound, not even our own footsteps.

Remember how once we stood in a sea warmed by a hot sun,
our weary  feet soothed in warm shallows, our skin scorched.

I remember the pain and sorrow of your departure to foreign lands,
and cried for a future that could not be ours as the sun set alone.

Now the mirror reflects back the empty years, loss and decay,
the window no longer opens- it's latch rusted in place.

Shall I open my door? venture outside?
I cannot for my old coat hangs precariously on an ageing nail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Neumann Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 6:15 AM
Rags cannot conceal beauty. Otherwise we can always turn the coat inside out. Kind wishes, Kai
Achilles Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:56 AM
thank you for your words, Julie
Trifiatis Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 4:57 AM
A heart yearning for love lost and dreaming of new love . Very well written dearest, Julie!
Achilles Avatar
December 21, 2019 at 4:22 AM
Thank you so much. Julie
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