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Losing To Love

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Dormant eyes that never sleep only find their way to weep, A broken heart on the mend upon silent solitudes that extend… My gentle soul enslaved in exile as tears deluge my fragile smile, Abandoned oblivions in their wake absorbing sorrows in their ache. Lachrymal lashes that deeply burn loves desires that spritely spurn, Black veil bride within her mourn reaching out in her selfish scorn… Amidst the white never black yet the darkened clouds will attack, Inoculant anguishes of the abyss as for loves embraces are amiss… Words from the wishing well spewing verses to break the spell, Dormant eyes soon shall see approaching the moment to be free. Sept.27.2019 Story of my life in ten lines Sponsored by: Silent One Music excerpt from Tool "Fear Inoculum" Album Song~Invincible With Female Virtual Voice Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2019 12:02:00 PM

- Congratulations W.W., on your 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/5/2019 9:33:00 PM

Hi WW, This is a good and well written piece for the contest. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of evening:-) Alexis

Silent One

Date: 10/4/2019 4:06:00 PM

Nice lines WW.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/4/2019 4:01:00 PM

Congratulations for your win WW :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/29/2019 3:06:00 AM

Intricately and creatively woven ^WW^ love your style of poetry powerful imagination that soars, and a muse that won't go anywhere who is completely spellbound and talented - together you have reached great heights - this is a fave! Hugs and blessing my friend, Jenn.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/27/2019 9:57:00 PM

powerful words falling from your pen...great write! :) hugs

Debra Squyres

Date: 9/27/2019 5:13:00 PM

Each line is deeply moving to this reader.

Chris Green

Date: 9/27/2019 4:51:00 PM

Really cool my friend. This was creative and definitely one that will do well in the contest. Best wishes WW