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Losing My Senses

A week of colds strike my way, wishing this virus melts away. foods are now tasteless, buds not function well. nose is suffocated, I almost sneeze my brain. Afraid to lose my senses, Hear,smell,and taste. I wonder how this life'll look like, When this illness get severe. I hope tomorrow,sun greets me. With the smell of breeze upon my face. The sweet of honey kisses my lips. Robin chirping in my ears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/10/2014 12:14:00 PM
COLD....poem is coool...touching
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/10/2014 2:03:00 PM
thank you, Syam!!! ^__^ :00))
Date: 1/10/2014 11:43:00 AM
Beautiful writing my friend, sorry to hear you have s cold. I hope the warmth of knowing me will help youoovercome this bug. Hugs your friend Michael
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/10/2014 2:03:00 PM
thank you, Mike :))
Date: 1/10/2014 10:42:00 AM
I'm recovering from a cold myself. So, I completely understand. :) This was an enjoyable read!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/10/2014 10:55:00 AM
thank you ,Drake!!! glad to know you're OK :))

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